李永乐 数学讲师
广受学生信赖的“线代王”
2023考研英语一小作文:10分,100词,应用文主要包括:申请信、建议信、表扬信、道歉信、回复信。大作文:20分,200词,图画图表作文主要是社会现象和世界观价值观问题。英语二作文15分。平均分:小作文5~6分,大作文12~15分,总分10~25分之间。
主题一:关于人。最重要的就是人生哲理文章特别受重视。我随手找了几副漫画,大家可以试写一下,这个内容可是所有网络上你能找到的辅导机构的材料中都没有的。根据近几年特殊情况,我个人认为涉及人的主题可能会包括:健康,创新科技,锻炼,坚持努力,人口老龄化人口增长问题反思和孝顺,等等。
主题二:关于自然,个人认为环境保护,动物保护,新能源研发人与自然关系和谐需要重视。
主题三:关于社会,个人认为主要注意合作表达,共同体表达,文化继承和创新,普通话继续推广和方言非物质文化遗产冲突,流行吻话比如主播流量,适时而变,热门专业就业选择,包括对事情的过程和结果的反思,冒险精神等等。
In the above picture, there are two men building walls with entirely distinct attitudes—one man is working in an absent-minded and distracted manner and building a low and shaky wall, while the other one is dedicated and diligent, completing a high and substantial wall. The sharp distinction can be illustrated by the principle revealed in the caption—attitude determines the height of life.
It is self-evident that the cartoonist intends to underline the truth that a positive and industrious attitude possesses an indispensable value in the path to success and achievement. People with positive and diligent attitude see every task as a holy mission, which will definitely help them establish explicit goals, overcome insuperable obstacles and then attain unprecedented success in the life journey. In contrast, people working indifferently and irresponsibly view every task as a burdenand quickly throw away. With this negative attitude, their personal growth will be surely discouraged, meaning that they can never keep pace with those high achievers.
Just as Bertrand Russell, one of the greatest philosophers and writers in the history of Britain, commented, “Almost any situation—good or bad, promising or desperate—is affected by the attitude we bring to.” Obviously, a man with correct and positive attitude can indisputably reap remarkable fruits in the harvest season of his life.
很多小伙伴可能还不知道作文什么时候开始准备,也有人说写作文的时候,写到一半就写不下去了。我想说,至少考前一个月必须动手写!每周2-3篇即可。在作文的准备过程中,写是最痛苦的,我也是从那个时候经历过来的,但是就像说的那样“过程痛苦总比在考场上痛苦好”!
所以,写作一定要动手写!动手写!动手写!重要的事说三遍。
写了之后还有一个重要的步骤就是批改。想要作文意思表达清楚,没有语病也挺难的,自己写的作文自己永远看不出来问题,但实际却是问题重重,特别是刚开始写的时候。因此写出来的作文有高人帮你批改还不错,这样才能发现自己的不足和短板,才能让自己有进步。之前有人问我在哪找人帮忙批改,这就要看各位同学自己的本事或者渠道了:如果身边有和自己处得来的英语老师或者学霸,那可以礼貌地询问一下是否可以有偿帮忙;如果实在不好意思联系身边的老师或同学,也可以直接找考研英语界的老师报个班啥的;一般那种不管是免费的还是付费的机器批改不是很推崇,因为那只能改个皮毛,如果实在没辙那就用机批吧。