李永乐 数学讲师
广受学生信赖的“线代王”
怎样写出一篇好的建议信
书信是人类交流的一种最古老也是最重要的方式之一, 对于人类的交际具有重要的意义。
大学生无论在何时何地,都需要因为各种原因而给相关人士写信,来表达自己的动机、目的和望等。书信分为私人信函和公务信函。私人信函属于非正式文体,一般是指与熟人、家人和朋友之间进行日常事务交流的信件。私人信件用词可以比较随意,但是语气要真挚。
公务信件则属于正式文体,通常用于商务和外贸场合,以及公司与公司之间、与客户之间的业务往来等。其中最实用也是最重要的包括辞职信、请求信、建议信、求职信、道歉信、感谢信、申请信、投诉信、询问信、邀请信和祝贺信等。
尽管书信类别多样,但是我们一定要牢记, 所有的书信都是“万变不离其宗”,只要掌握其格式、框架和基本语气,就能够写出一篇质量上乘的书信出来。
下面分享一些考研英语小作文建议信的有关知识以及句式模板。
建议信是建议收信人采取某种行动的信件,可以是做出某种选择或某种改变。建议信也有公函和私人信函之分,公函格式比较固定、正式,私人信函则比较随意。
考研英语小作文建议信的写作结构:1.自我介绍,说明目的。2.委婉地提出建议及改进措施,或提出忠告。3.采纳建议会带来的好处,礼貌总结或期盼回复。
建议信常用词汇:
feedback n.反馈
feasible adj.可行的
suggestion n.建议
proposal n.建议
venture v.冒味做某事
beneficial adj. 有益的
advise v. 建议
suggest v. 建议
recommend v. 推荐,劝告
wise adj.明智的
建议信常用句式:
1. However, to you, I highly recommend...
但是对你而言,我强烈推荐...
2. If you can make a careful study..., I am convinced that your skills of ...will be greatly improved.
如果你能认真学习...,我相信你的能力将极大提高。
3. To solve this problem, in my mind...
为了解决这一问题,我的看法是...
4. I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信谈谈关于...的看法。
5. You have asked me for my advice with regard to ... , and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
就...一事你征询我的意见,我会尽量给出有建设性的建议。
6. I feel that it would be beneficial if ....
我认为如果...将会收益。
7. If I were you, I would...
如果我是你,我就会...
8. I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.
我愿意就此时的细节进行讨论。
9. Freshman as I am, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning.
作为一名大一新生,我觉得有义务对...问题提出些建议。
10. I sincerely hope that my proposals would be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.
衷心希望您能考虑我的建议,并在这些方面进行积极的改变。
黄金模板:
Dear______,
As______, I am writing this letter to express my views concerning______. Although______, there is still much room for improvement. For instance,______.
In view of these facts, I would like to make the following suggestions. First/Above all,______. Second/Moreover,______.
I above all hope you will find these suggestions helpful/practical.
Yours sincerely,
____________
经典范文:
Directions: Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use“Li Ming”instead. Do not write the address.
Dear Sir/Madam,
As a student of our university, I am writing this letter to express my views concerning the service of our library. Although we have benefited enormously from our library, there is still much room for improvement. For instance, many books in the library are totally obsolete and some of the librarians are ill- mannered.
In view of these facts, I would like to make the following suggestions. First, more books should be purchased according to the students' needs, especially the ones on IT and modern literature. Second, students should be given the right to evaluate the librarians, which will be concerned with their income.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
尊敬的先生/夫人:
作为我们大学的一名学生,我写这封信是为了表达我对我们图书馆服务的看法。虽然我们从图书馆中获益良多,但仍有很大的改进空间,例如,图书馆里的许多书完全过时了,有些图书馆员举止失礼。
鉴于这些事实,我想提出以下建议:第一,应该根据学生的需要购买更多的书籍,特别是关于信息技术和现代文学的书籍;第二,应该给予学生评价图书馆员的权利,评价关系到他们的收入。
我希望这些建议对你有帮助。
只要每一位考生好好利用这些句式,模板,多加练习,紧扣主题,把字写好,在考场上写出一篇好的建议信就轻轻松松。